Kidnapped By Chresanto August Father

~flash back~ The sky was as blue as a crayola crayon. The birds were singing and there wasn't a cloud in sight. I was at the park with my mom and dad. They sat on a near by bench while I went to go play with random children. I was having so much fun when I saw a man looking for something .... or someone ? I approached the frantic man. "Excuse me sir. Are you okay ?" "I can't find my dog ... will you help me find her ?" "Sure lets go !" We started searching for the puppy "Sir ! Sir ! I think I found your dog !!" The man approached me thank you so much for finding my dog. "No problem ... Bye Mister !" I was so pleased with my action of helping somebody. I was a nice girl. Only four years old. Good manners, and very intelligent. Everything in my life seemed to be just fine until my parents were murdered. I was walking back towards the playground when I heard loud bangs. People all around the park went into a fright fest. Parents were searching for kids while kids were crying. I didn't understand what was happening. All of a sudden everything stopped. Everyone was gone except two people. They were sleeping on the ground. "Mommy, Daddy get up ! We need to go home !" They didn't move. I got onto my knees to shake them when I felt something wet (dirty mind) on my hands. It was a think red substance Blood ! Mommy, Daddy please get up please! I need you." I was going into a panic attack. I could feel my heart rate increase as my body grew weak. I felt a presence hovering over me. I saw the figure raise its' arm and ...... I Blacked Out --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- How is my story ? Comment any ideas! Be honest I want your opinion ! Love you bunches.